Whew.... haven't posted in a while. This is the story that in some ways is a follow up the Olympic ballbusting tale I posted ages ago... Anyway a few people seemed to like the commentary style so here is my effort... It's loosely inspired by bra and panties wrestlng matches that used to be shown on WWF or whatever. It probably needs proofing more than it has been but I'll do that in due course. Might not be everyones cup of tea but enjoy!
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Steve: "Good evening everyone listening and watching - this is the 12th annual Struggle tournaments coming to you live from Cincinatti!"
Jess: "Why don't you take our new listeners through this part Steve - after all it is your department..."
Steve: "Right Jess! Women enter the ring fully clothed - wearing exactly what they had on when we snatched them from the street. The goal of the guy is to strip the girl down to her birthday suit! Panties and all! There is no pin fall - the lady is disqualified the moment her last piece of clothing is stripped from her!"
Jess: "Well here comes tonights unwilling challenger - I know you enjoy this part why don't you break it down for us Steve, I'm sure all our male listeners are eager to know what the young lady is wearing..."
Steve: "Our challenger is Nancy DeLino - an office temp from Chicago and she's a picture. Pale blouse and a dark tight fitting pencil skirt that leaves nothing to the imagination... now then, fresh as she looks I don't think even her legs can look that good and - yep, as she walks under the big stage lights you can see the tell tale sheen of pantyhose - let's hope they're stockings under that skirt!"
Jess: "Mind on the job Steve..."
Steve: "ahem.... and finishing it all off are a pair of three inch kitten heels. Like I said guys, she's a picture. It'll all have to come off though if our man wants the cash prize - or the chance to take advantage of that body..."
Jess: "Not so fast Steve! That's the ladies side of the event but how about the men? They enter the ring with no clothes at all - or near enough right?"
Steve: "That's right Jess! The man enters the ring with no clothes save for the smallest speedos our cheerleaders could fit him into."
Jess: "You're not lying Steve, I can make out that young competitor package from here."
Steve: "That's the point Jess, our young buck - Eric Pullman - has nowhere to hide..."
Jess: "And by hide you mean..!"
Steve: "Yes, thank you Jess you can stop nudging me in the side... its the young mans nuts that are in the firing line. And just as there is no pinfall for the ladies, the men can are disqualified if-"
Jess: "-If both of their plums burst!"
Steve: *Cough* "Yes thankyou Jess... if the ladies can unman their opponent then they are crowned winner of the money and if they want the chance to do whatever else they want with the loser..."
Jess: "Well Pullman is a big blonde musclebound stud... not very popular with the ladies in this crowd though. He's already seen off two ladies in the ring this tournament without any damage to his ego or.... anything else sadly. They're both in the ring now though... Pullman is pacing ready to get started and poor Nancy Delino looks like a deer in headlights. She's stood a few feet from her corner of the ring and she really doesn't know where to look or what to do! She better look sharp *DING!* there's the bell and the match is under way!"
Steve: "Ow! We're barely five seconds in and already fresh faced Nancy is forced to eat canvas! Pullman tackles her hard and she goes down. Eric's done this before Jess and he's doing the sensible thing. Oh yes, he's grabbed Miss DeLino's shapely little legs and slipped off her shoes. And theres a great big cheer from the men in the crowd as he throws those little leather heels into row F."
Jess: "Nancy won't realise it yet but losing her heels this early is a big blow to her chances..."
Steve: "Too right Jess! Eric will will be glad to see the backs of those office slingbacks. Points and heels really give the ladies an edge when it comes to breaking men in this ring - too bad for Nancy Delino!"
Jess: "Nancy staggers back to her feet in the mean time but she only has a moment before Eric is on her again! He grabs a handful of her pale blouse and a powerful yank is all it takes to make the buttons fly and expose a little more of the temps naked body."
Steve: "A Little?! Jess the front of Nancy's blouse is wide open I think I can just about make out a white satin bra..."
Jess: "Get your mind out of Nancy's cleavage and back on the fight! Pullman hasn't won this by a long shot yet Steve."
Steve: "That's right Jess - Pullman will need to completely strip Miss DeLino if he wants to have his way with her and that means even that stunning bra".
Jess: "Miss DeLino backs herself into a corner - what can she be thinking?"
Steve: "I don't know Jess but if she thinks she's got a better chance of defending herself there she's dead wrong. Pullman wrestles the delicate flower to the floor and wastes no time flipping her over - looks like the gold zip on the back of Nancy's skirt is the new target. You'd think it was a little stairway to heaven from the way Pullman goes about running the zipper down Delino's waistline, and now Miss Delino's legs are flailing but it's too little too late as theres nothing she can do to stop our super stud slipping the skirt off her legs and throwing it into the crowd! Looks like it's a pair of tights and not a garter belt and stockings. Shame really..."
"In any case, Pullman is taking your girl apart Jess, I can't see this fight lasting much longer".
Jess: "Pullman still has a way to go Steve, remember all Nancy has to remove is whats between his legs!"
"Looks like Nancy is finally getting her game head on, she's rolled over and she looks pissed - good to see a lady who isn't scared of losing a few clothes, even if all the world can see! She's using those strong legs, and even though she's got her back to the floor she's bucking her feet out at her opponent and catches him a few times on the thigh and shin. Pullman's too wary to let her have a clear front on shot of his package but - oh! She manages a glancing kick and that has made Pullman think twice!"
Steve: "Pullman looks furious - he backs off but then charges blindly and Miss Delino is like a deer in the headlights. She closes her eyes - and oh my goodness!"
Jess: "Owch! That's all it takes Steve... Nancy raises her foot at the last moment and it stops Pullman's charge dead in it's tracks... those big hands are covering those big nuts and suddenly the super stud isn't looking too peachy Steve".
Steve: "Uhhh, you're not wrong Paula... I'm looking at the replays and Eric's momentum carried him right onto the office temps foot. He's shuffling into his corner and he's called for a time out."
Jess: "Pullman is still in agony and clutching his package, I'm beginning to think one his oversized bubbles might just have burst! And sure enough the ladies ref Linda Lacy is in the ring like a shot to examine the ailing stud. This will be a big boost for our young office temp..."
Steve: "There's no way Paula..."
Jess:"Take a look Steve. That symmetrical double bulge is looking a little lop-sided now! Looks like Nancy DeLino's little feet have scored a blow for women everywhere and now every woman in the audience wants to know whether she's got the spunk to finish the job and turn this jock into a Jill."
"This match just got really interesting! We'll be back after a short break!"
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Jess: "Well we're back! Pullman is back on his feet after a few shots to keep the pain manageable and keep him on his feet... now its Nancy who is pacing warily on the other side of the ring..."
Steve: "Pullman still has plenty of fight Jess - the refs concluded that it wasn't a total rupture. Pullman will want to end this match quickly - it just means now he'll be more eager to get himself to a hospital post-match than taking advantage of a naked Miss Delino..."
*DING!*
Jess: "Well here comes the next round - and here comes Pullman!"
Steve: "Wasting time he isn't! You can see the pain his movement but once again Nancy doesn't know what to do as the stud grabs her by the legs and plants her back down onto the canvas - that will wind her Jess! Pullman flips the girl onto her front and moves in-"
Jess: "Nancy's feet are flailing around, she knows all she needs is a good solid hit on that solitary bulge and she'll rock Pullman's world for the second time this evening".
Steve: "Pullman's having none of it Jess, she's on her back and he's crouched on her ass and - oh yes! He grabs two handfuls of tan pantyhose and yanks hard on the material covering Miss Delino's shapely ass cheeks! Miss DeLino struggles hard but it only takes a second and the strong arms of Eric Pullman begin to ladder those tights to shreds!"
Jess: "Nancy needs to aim a little higher the tips of her toes are almost kissing Pullman's bulge but she's just-"
Steve: "Sorry Jess but more and more bare skin gets revealed as Eric finally grabs a fistfull of that tan pantyhose and successfully strips one leg bare - even you have to admit little Nancy is in a precarious spot now, she's nearly naked from the waist down! But Pullman isn't done yet - he's going for it! Those big hands of his are going for the waistband of DeLino's tights and knickers and it's all coming off! But Pullman needs to be careful - Nancy's flailing feet are homing in on their target - but Eric doesnt care, the first yank pulls the young ladies hips clean off the canvas and the men in the crowd get the first glimpse of the modest mound of our office temp! He's got the ladies unmentionables almost around her knees but he needs to be careful and - oh no!"
Jess: "Oh yes Steve! Finally Nancy gets a palpable hit on the last gonad. It's just enough to make the dumb stud think twice - but now Nancy has the range and her toes find Pullman's bollock again! Ouch Steve, I've never seen a man jump off the ground from a hit to the nuts before! And now it's Pullman who looks like a deer in the headlights as Nancy finally gets the arch of her foot involved and the pendulous target richochets around the boys crotch like a pinball!"
Steve: "Pullman is in real trouble here, he's got one hand on his bruised tackle as he staggers off of DeLino's prone form, and with the other he signals to the ref for a timeout."
Jess: "Too bad Steve! Pullman has already used up his timeout! He hasn't seen the ref shaking her head - and as he staggers backwards against the turnbuckle he still hasn't realised! But Nancy DeLino has - she's already on her feet, she runs in and launches a flying knee into the unsuspecting Eric Pullman. And Pullman must have felt that in every part of his body! He's in agony - but Nancy DeLino isn't finished yet. It seems she's finally woken up to the fight she's in and the opportunity she's got! The next kick knocks Pullman back against the turnbuckle and he's ripe for the picking now Steve!"
Steve: "Pullman needs to get it together!"
Jess: "No chance Steve! Nancy is really getting into her stride now, look at her gritting her teeth as the young beauty throws kick after kick into Pullman's crippled crotch! He's covering whatever is left in those trunks with his hands - but it doesn't matter! Nancy feigns a kick and Pullman clutches his junk hard and Nancy chooses to steam a kneecap home into those babymakers! And thats it Pullman sinks to the ground - he's teetering on the edge Steve!"
"Can you hear the women in the crowd Steve! They're all on their feet. They sense whats coming..."
Steve: *cough* "And what's that Paula?"
POP HIM! POP HIM! POP HIM!
Steve: "Do I need to tell you Steve...?"
*Cough*
Jess: "Didn't catch that Steve...? Oh! It'll have to wait, Nancy has raised her leg up and-"
"Eric's broken bollock finally bites it! The stud might have been hoping someone could stitch it back together after the match but Nancy Delino has other ideas. Her foot smashes into the already deflated half of Pullman's sack and man-boy is now in another world of pain! Every woman in this room is willing her to bash the other bollock in! And if Pullman thinks he's getting any mercy he's wrong because Nancy has that second nut in her sights now and..."
ONE!
"Practice kick, as the temp stamps blindly at Pullman's junk!"
TWO!
"Nancy really put her weight behind that one! Looks like she's really working over the bigger of Eric's gonads!"
THREE!
Jess: "She's stamping her heel down hard now Steve I don't give that big bulge much longer!"
Steve: "You're forgetting how hard it is crush a ball against canvas Paula..."
Jess: "Well it looks like Nancy's worked that out! She's mounted the turnbuckle to get some more leverage in her stomps and I don't think Eric's ready for whats coming!"
FOUR!
Steve: "Ouch! Well I've seen it all Jess - desperate, desperate move from Pullman - he sticks his foot up and this time its Nancy's cooch that's on the receiving end of her own momentum and she goes down hard! Both competitors are now clutching their crotches but its Pullman that stirs first."
Jess: "He knows exactly whats on the line Steve but there doesn't look to be much fight left in the stud- sorry, half-stud..."
Steve: "Wouldn't worry about that Jess, Pullman's running on pure adrenaline now, he knows he has to seal the deal - he edges closer to Miss Delino's prone form and tentatively pulls on the pantyhose that still covers the toes of one of the ladies legs! It's all peeling off, knee, calf, ankle! Off it all comes and finally Miss Delino is half naked! Her bra and blouse are all that are left and Pullman is wasting no time. He's battered and bruised but he grabs the hem of that blouse and finally shows some downright aggression! Eric pulls the top up and over Nancy's head and the office temp has no answer to the force with which the pale blouse yanked off her - her arms are pulled free of the sleeves and thats it Pullman just has to liberate the temps bra and it's all over for the young woman from Chicago..."
Jess: "Well if he's like most men we'll be here a while if he tries to unhook it."
Steve: "Tentative approach again as Nancy tries to get to her feet - Pullman grabs both shoulder straps and yanks them down but it's not over yet - Pullman needs to take it off completely!"
Jess: "Look Steve, Nancy is reaching for Pullman's sack - if she gets a good grip it could all be over!"
Steve: "Pullman is desperate to not let that happen - he's sticking his backside out - trying desperately to keep Nancy's prying manicures away from his bollock. Meanwhile Pullman has pulled the cups of Nancy's creamy bra down and now all the men in the crowd roar their approval at the first glimpse of naked Nancy's nipples!"
Jess: "Too bad you're big fucknut didn't try and unhook her bra, Nancy reaches....! And she grabs that last battered bollock in her hands and she squeezes!"
Steve: "No! He's almost got it off, just a few more seconds!"
Jess: "Seconds I'm afraid Pullman doesn't have Steve, his knees have already buckled and he's given up on the bra - he just wants the young womans hands off his tackle. But Nancy isn't letting go!"
Steve: "Both competitors are writhing around on the floor now, we can't get a clear camera angle but as far as we can see Miss Delino still has her hands wrapped firmly around whats left of Pullman's package..."
Jess: "This can't go on Steve... something has to give. It looks like the ref is on the verge of breaking this up - but no wait! Eric Pullman just gave off an unholy yell and Nancy is up off the floor and jumping up and down - it looks like she's claiming it! Pullman is whining like a child and the refs are in the ring - it's taking three of them just to prise the young mans knees open and get his hands off his sack... we should hear a verdict anytime!"
Steve: "I can see two of the refs shaking their heads..."
Jess: "They're not the only ones, Pullman's shaking his head and thrashing about like a wild thing - he's already lost though all he can do is wait for the Refs to decide the damage... And we're hearing now... it looks like Eric Pullman's last bollock is ruptured but still more or less in one piece! The refs have deliberated and have decided that the match is still awarded to Nancy Delino - but that she has the right to decide whether to let Pullman leave the ring with something intact.."
Steve: "It looks like his fate rests with the crowd..."
POP! POP! POP! POP! POP!
Jess: "I've never heard the men in this arena outshout the women and the women have spoken! Miss Delino gets up close to Eric Pullman and for the first time in the whole match she's wearing a smirk - looks like the power has gone to young womans head. She pulls those speedos to one side and out squirts Pullman's broken package - lets get a high def camera in there..."
Steve: "You can calm down you know Jess..."
Jess: "Look at that Steve, you can really see the dent left in Pullman's tackle - and now its flush on the canvas for the world to see... but not for much longer."
Steve: "The refs are reprimanding Nancy Delino for grandstanding here - they're telling her to either spare the man or finish it... But she has other ideas... She's looking Pullman right in the eye as she unhooks her bra - the men in the audience have suddenly perked up! This is a real taunt to the young half-man - she whirls her last piece of clothing in the air letting Pullman get a good look at the body he won't be laying a finger on... and oh my - she's using one of the straps of her bra as nut noose now... isolating Pullman's remaining manhood from the remnants of its ruined twin. Theres not a woman in the world that could miss that big angry red bulge - and Pullman's stopped struggling, he's just looking at Delino with horror and so he should!"
Steve: "Sad to say... it's the look of a man who knows his world is about to permanently change..."
Jess: "And here comes the change - Nancy has her foot arched over Pullman's world! She's barely touching him but already his back arches in pain - his head is writhing on the canvas, I doubt he'd want to watch this anyway. A little shift in posture and her calf muscles begin to push her foot down! And the ladies in the crowd are deafining me, I can't hear a thing - but there it is! It's all over! Pullman's bulging gland seemingly breaks in two and bursts out in opposite directions from under Nancy Delino's tiny foot."
Steve: "Pullman looks to be unconscious..."
Jess: "A lucky escape for the young man - oh whoops - not a young man anymore. Miss Delino is grinding her heel around - making sure her demolition of 'Erica' Pullman is complete. All that remains is the presentation ceremony - Miss Delino will be receiving a six figure prize or the chance to double her money if she can go one on one with another man and reduce him to ruins. What will she decide to do? Stay tuned to find out!"